Opening paragraph – using speech
“Kim, want to go play basketball downstairs near the community centre? I asked my neighbor, Kimberly, excitedly.
“Sure! Let’s go then!” Kimberly replied in a great mood tone.
We talked and chatter down the street to the basketball court. “Bang!” A sudden loud crash disturbed us. We turned around quickly in the direction of the crash. Soon, we spotted a motorcyclist rushing off with full speed and an old man lying on the floor injured.
As soon as possible, we rushed to help. A commotion started at the place.
Clement-Why is there Kim, then Kimberly?
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