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Thursday, 14 July 2011

Compo Term 3 Package- opening paragraph(using speech)

Genson-

  “Bang!”  “Oh my god! What Just happened?” I exclaimed. “I don’t know. Just when I was about to score, that old man fell to the ground, distracted me and I was about to win the game.” replied Jake. “Let’s check it out.” I continued.

1 comment:

  1. Chang Hui
    How did the old man land on the ground and how did he distract you?

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