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Thursday, 14 July 2011

Compo T3 Package - Opening Paragraph ( using speech)

Yee Lin

     “Hello Paul! Are you going to play basketball?” I asked.” Wait a while please! I am wearing my socks and shoes!” Paul replied. “Quickly! I am going down to house downstairs.” I said as went down the stairs. “Okay!” He said. When I reached the house down and I saw him downstairs at his flat. We decide to walk to the Community Centre. When we reached the Community Centre, we saw a crowded of people on the nearby road.”Hey , Paul do you want go and see what are they crowding at?” I said. “Okay, fine.” He replied. They went to the crowd and an old  man lying on the road. The crowd of people said “A motorcyclist had knock the old man”. 

4 comments:

  1. Gavin-What do u mean by 'crowded of people'?

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  2. how did the motorcyclist knock the old man?

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  3. Yi Ning:

    Why do you want to play basketball?

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  4. Ian- When did the incident happen?

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