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Thursday, 14 July 2011

Compo Term 3 Package- opening paragraph(using speech)

Shannon-


Mum, can I go to the park with our neighbour?” I
asked.
“Yes. You may” Mum replied.
“Come on, Shi han!” I said
As we are walking down the road, we saw a man knocked the old man and ran off. We went to see what happened.
“Are you okay?” said Shi han.
“I am fine.” said the old man in a slowly and weakly voice.
“ Shall we take you to the doctor for checkup? Shi han and I said together. 

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  2. Eliza: Why did you and Shi han want to bring the old man to a doctor for checkup?

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  3. Shi Han:How did the old man attacked?

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