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“Shall we go down to the basketball court near the community centre?” said Shannon .
I replied excitedly, “of course, let me take my basketball, backpack and my favourite basketball shoe!”
While walking to the road, we saw a motorcyclist had down an old man and sped off. We quickly went to check on the old man sitting on the floor. “Are you all right?” said Shannon .
“I am fine. Thank you!” replied the old man with a slow and weak voice.
“Shall we take you to the clinic?” said Shannon and I.
Suddenly, we heard, “ Ouch!’ The old man cried in pain.
Suddenly, we heard, “ Ouch!’ The old man cried in pain.
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ReplyDeleteWhy did you and Shanon want to bring the injured old man to the clinic?
ReplyDeleteHow did the motorcyclist knock the old man down?
ReplyDeletewhich road are you at?
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